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Monday, March 11, 2013

寫故事-Legoland Trip (5.3 yrs)

Kiki看表姐愛寫故事畫圖, 有樣學樣的在阿公家花了兩天寫了故事及插圖,還是Chapter book呢! 很多字她都自己照phonics拼, 所以下面媽媽幫她修正了拼音, 比較容易看懂. Kiki的第一個故事 -

Legoland Trip

By Trisha.  Illustrated by Kiki.

Chapter 1

Me and sister went to Legoland. In the picture, we are lining up for the fire truck. The fire truck was so fun. The helping people was named Nessa. Nessa was so funny that we laugh and laugh very long. The fire truck thought we are their friends. I like there too. My sister like it too. There was so many rides. we drove there a very long time. It was a silcle(?) because it was so far.

插圖: fire truck and rides.

We were playing as princess + catch the bad guy. It was fun at Legoland. Los Angeles was the best place in the whole earth. That was our favorite ride that we ever ride. Just then it start to rain, we have to go in and then the ride closed. We camped there very long. We stayed up until the ride are closed. We are happy. I will not talk about my mommy and daddy in this chapter.

插圖: 開車去legoland

Chapter 2

We are playing at the water park two slide. I was afraid to go down them. On the orange slide, my daddy always splash into the water. The slide that I was afraid to go on, one color was red, and one was blue. It was fun. I was happy because sister want to.

插圖: water park at legoland.

We went on the floating river. There was people raining water. Some people were caught in the rain there on both sides. I don’t like the people splash me. My sister did not like to  be splash to. There was some little slide. One was orange the other slides was blue and red. The red was a tunnel. the orange one was the fat one.

插圖: ???

The end

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